LawlessFighter's Reviews

[These Pancakes Are Tiny]

Smooth

This gets a full 10 out of 10, its a great animation, the flash skill is evident, the subtle humor is brilliant and the building swear words is awesome. My favorite part in the entire animation is that 3 second pause, when the waitress is like O_O and the blue brother just goes... "fair enough" I laugh every time.

I Love the facial expressions, they work beautifully with the dialogue. And the subtle gestures are very realistic.

Only thing I noticed as a slight flaw is that in while in the car, there are a few points where the red brother says "big" or "pancakes" where its evident that he's using a microphone because there is a slight -pah- like when you exhale onto the microphone.

I'm a perfectionist, but this piece, was amazing, I laugh every time.

[Zelda: Heart for the Hero]

Wow... just wow

OMFG I just noticed the "Hay! Listen, 5.00$" >_<

God I fell out of my chair laughing at that and the Blue Button "Kill Navi" ha ha ha I hate her so much...

Great creative story, its hard to do original Zelda work after all the spin offs that have already been done but this one was like a breath of fresh air. And the animation itself was top notch, I couldn't pick out any thing in the animation sequences that looked choppy or uncoordinated.

The only thing I noticed, was that in the loading screen it looks like he's jerkin' it -_-;;

just thought I'd point that one out to ya XD

[Broken Mirror]

Shattered like dreams across the cobblestone

Another very strong piece. My only critique would be that the main synth (Sounds almost like a church organ or bell) is a little loud and obnoxious sometimes, and on any mediocre speakers it can create some static. Not that I'm suggesting you should please everyone, just that it would make the track less aggressive.

And I think Broken Mirror is a better title anyway :P

[Sweet poison jazz]

Some of the best ambient I've heard

I won't say I'm an expert, because that would be a filthy lie. However I do run a lot of pen and paper games, and I always hit newgrounds for music to emphasize the atmosphere. Lately the ambient section has been full of slow sad music, and a lot of it isn't very good.

I stumbled on your stuff and gotta say its a cut about the rest of what I've heard thus far. This track especially caught my interest, and I'll probably be using it for a nightclub scene somewhere. So thank you, and keep doing what you're doing!

Tulvadar responds:

I am truly happy because of your words. Thank you! I would be grateful and overjoyed if you could listen to my other works as well, tell me what you think and see if you like any other songs that i made.

[Eminent Part 2 - CaL]

Just to bring the score back up

Because that kid decided to give you a useless, meaningless review, and this song in no way deserves it.

Very well written, good classical string pieces are harder and harder to find in the digital age, but there are some things that simply demand the classics. I'm running a pen and paper campaign, and I was on Newgrounds looking for background music/inspirational music while I finish writing parts of it.

This and Eminent part 1 are the Senate house pieces. Good strong strings fit the classic trial so well, there's simply no other option at this point.

I will say I like the first part more, though I couldn't tell you why, just like the progression more I guess.

All in all, both parts are wonderful, I'm amazed so few have heard this piece, its truly a crime, and for that you get full marks from me. Here's to hoping more people hear your beautiful music!

ca1en responds:

It means a lot to hear that man. I've always loved classical music and yes it is definately a lot harder to come by in this day.

I'm glad you appreciate my music, I haven't made much recently and I haven't really had much reason to continue my string peices, however reviews like this definately make me consider making more.

Thank you very much.